四級(jí)寫作必備經(jīng)典范文:盲目追星
Write a composition entitled Blindly Worshipping Stars. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.
1.很多人日益迷戀名人;
2.盲目追星存在的危險(xiǎn);
3.提出你的觀點(diǎn)。
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英語四級(jí)作文步驟構(gòu)思:
步驟1:
審題:這是一篇以追星為主題的解釋說明文。
步驟2:
引入話題:點(diǎn)出盲目追星的社會(huì)環(huán)境;
展開話題:從三方面闡述盲目追星的危險(xiǎn);
話題結(jié)論:提出自己的觀點(diǎn),明星也有自己的缺點(diǎn)和不足。
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英語四級(jí)作文范文:
Blindly Worshipping Stars
With the ever-growing popularity of the Intemet, it is becoming much easier to keep track of your favorite celebrities. Because of the vast amounts of information about these celebrities that exists, it is easy to become mesmerized by them.
隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的使用越來越普遍,我們能夠更方便地了解到自己喜歡的明星們的動(dòng)態(tài)。因?yàn)榫W(wǎng)上有大量關(guān)于這些名人的信息,所以很容易對(duì)他們癡迷。
But blindly worshipping these stars can be dangerous. First of all, celebrities tend to live by different rules to everyone else. If you were to adapt their unhealthy lifestyle, you would most certainly have to pay for the consequences. Secondly, celebrities are often seen in expensive clothing, cars, and homes that most people cannot afford. In addition, photographs that you see of celebrities are often touched up to make them look more perfect than they really are.
但是盲目追星卻是很危險(xiǎn)的。首先,名人們的生活準(zhǔn)則一般不同于普通大眾。如果你非要盲從他們不健康的生活方式,必然要付出相應(yīng)的代價(jià)。第二,名人們通常看起來都穿昂貴的衣飾,坐名貴香車,住奢華豪宅,這些都是大多數(shù)人無法承擔(dān)支付的。而且,關(guān)于明星的照片也通常美化名人,使他們看起來比真實(shí)生活中更加完美。
If there are celebrities that you like, it is best to remember that their lives are very different from most people's lives and that though may seem glamorous, they have their own imperfections like everyone else.(152 words)
如果你也有自己喜歡的明星,最好要記住這一點(diǎn):他們的生活不同于大多數(shù)人,即使看起來非常風(fēng)光,他們也像其他人一樣存在著缺點(diǎn)和不足。
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英語四級(jí)作文高分句型解析:
…it is best to remember that their lives are very different from most people's lives and that though may seem glamorous, they have their own imperfections like everyone else.……最好要記住這一點(diǎn):他們的生活不同于大多數(shù)人,即使看起來非常風(fēng)光,他們也像其他人一樣存在著缺點(diǎn)和不足。
點(diǎn)評(píng):這是一個(gè)賓語從句,兩個(gè)由that引導(dǎo)的從句作remember的賓語,其中第二個(gè)that賓語從句中又包括一個(gè)由though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句,四級(jí)寫作中能準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用一些類似的復(fù)雜句型,也是寫作中的一大亮點(diǎn)。
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英語四級(jí)作文加分詞:
keep track of 了解
celebrity [sə'lebrəti] n.名人
mesmerize ['mezməraiz] v.迷惑,迷住
worship ['wə:rʃip] v.崇拜,尊敬
touch up 潤色,修改
glamorous ['glæmərəs] adj.富有魅力的
imperfection [,impər'fekʃn] n.瑕疵,缺點(diǎn)
