愛(ài)情是人類世界永恒不變的話題。有人說(shuō)缺少愛(ài)情會(huì)讓生活索然無(wú)味，而有些人卻認(rèn)為，愛(ài)情讓人變得盲目，缺少理性。愛(ài)情更是大學(xué)校園的敏感話題。
　　Love in College
　　As a college student, campus is our home, a warm and sunny house, you can find the vigor to live and sustain for ever. But do remember there is unusual scenery you should pay great attention to, that is the love in the campus. When it comes to this theme, various words rushed into my mind, sweet, happy, love for ever, everything sounds to be wonderful.
　　However, our elders always exaggerate about love in college. They believe that it is a waste of time and money. It will make students to forget their studies and eventually may even destroy their lives.
　　As for me, although I am looking forward to having an excellent boy study and live with me, it is just a dream actually.① We are still children, do not have enough experience in love; we do not take in the spirit of true love.② For us it is just a good feeling, a slight feeling because of well-dressed or handsome appearance, not by instinct. How about the personality or her habits, we do not know, we just love because of her beauty. Love depending on this will certainly go not so further, one day, you find you two are unable to share in the same way, you will quit, leaving tears fallen down. It turns out that love in the campus is commonly short and dreamful.
　　I think after you become mature enough, then you can use your sharp eyes to recognize people, find who you really suit to, then, take it seriously.③
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　　本文遵循總分總結(jié)構(gòu)模式對(duì)校園愛(ài)情這個(gè)話題進(jìn)行了分析和闡述。第一段引出話題，第二段列舉長(zhǎng)輩的意見提出對(duì)校園愛(ài)情反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn)。隨后在下一段中作者又進(jìn)一步提出自己對(duì)校園愛(ài)情的看法。最后一段作為總結(jié)，提出希望和建議。
　　文章結(jié)構(gòu)精巧，論證有力，正反對(duì)比加強(qiáng)了論證的效果。段落之間運(yùn)用了however，as for me 這樣的過(guò)渡詞使文章思路更加清晰，一目了然。certainly, seriously這樣的詞匯更使作者的態(tài)度鮮明確定。文章使用口語(yǔ)體的形式，所以在一些連接詞的使用上沒(méi)有過(guò)于遵守語(yǔ)法規(guī)則，這一點(diǎn)需要注意。
　　好文妙譯
　　校園愛(ài)情
　　作為一個(gè)大學(xué)生，校園就是我們的家，是充滿溫馨和陽(yáng)光的大家園，在這里我們活力四射，朝氣蓬勃。但是，別忘了，你也應(yīng)該注意到有這樣一道特殊風(fēng)景正在悄悄蔓延，那就是校園愛(ài)情。每當(dāng)提起這個(gè)字眼，各種美好的景象不禁使我浮想聯(lián)翩，甜蜜，幸福，一生一世，所有這一切聽起來(lái)都如此美妙。
　　相反，長(zhǎng)輩們卻總是過(guò)于夸大大學(xué)里的愛(ài)情。他們認(rèn)為愛(ài)情只是在浪費(fèi)時(shí)間和金錢，而且會(huì)使學(xué)生們荒廢學(xué)業(yè)，最終可能會(huì)毀掉他們的一生。
　　而對(duì)于我來(lái)說(shuō)，盡管也期待著有個(gè)優(yōu)秀的男孩相伴，一起讀書和生活，但這只不過(guò)是一個(gè)夢(mèng)罷了。我知道我們還都只是稚氣未脫的孩子，缺乏戀愛(ài)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，我們并沒(méi)有領(lǐng)悟愛(ài)情的精髓。愛(ài)情對(duì)于我們來(lái)說(shuō)，可能只是一種好感，一種受穿著和外表吸引的微妙情愫，并非出于本性。關(guān)于對(duì)方的性格喜好我們一無(wú)所知，我們只是傾心于她美麗的容顏。這樣的愛(ài)情并不會(huì)長(zhǎng)久，直到有一天你終于發(fā)現(xiàn)你們?cè)贈(zèng)]有任何共同點(diǎn)，于是你們選擇放棄這段感情，并為此黯然落淚。于是校園愛(ài)情往往只是短暫的夢(mèng)幻。
　　我認(rèn)為，只有真正走向成熟以后，你才具備足夠敏銳的眼光去認(rèn)識(shí)別人，最終找到真正適合自己的另一半，然后珍視你們的感情。
　　詞匯斟酌
　　?vigor n. 精力，活力
　　?sustain vt. 維持，持續(xù)
　　?scenery n. 風(fēng)景，景色
　　?exaggerate v. 夸大，夸張
　　?instinct n. 本能，直覺(jué)，天性
　　?personality n. 人格，個(gè)性
　　佳句臨摹
　　①【注釋】look forward to期待做…，盼望….
　　【臨摹】They are looking forward to her visit.他們?cè)谄诖膩?lái)訪。
　?、凇咀⑨尅縯ake in理解，吸收
　　【臨摹】We couldn’t take in the meaning of the word.我們無(wú)法理解這個(gè)詞的含義。
　　③【注釋】take sth. seriously嚴(yán)肅對(duì)待…，認(rèn)真看待…
　　【臨摹】You should step away from the video games，and take your study seriously.你應(yīng)該遠(yuǎn)離電子游戲，認(rèn)真對(duì)待學(xué)業(yè)。
　　思如泉涌
　　Love me little, love me long. 愛(ài)不貴親密，貴長(zhǎng)久。
　　Love is blind. 愛(ài)情是盲目的。